PORIBORTON KOBE HOBE ? পরিবর্তন কবে হবে?

Aaj bristi elo,kichu katha holo
or baddo tara chhilo,bari fire gyalo
ami akash er dike che roilam
akta proshno korlam
poriborton hobe to?


Bridger tolai khudhito shishu ra khali gaye 
garam er shathe mile mishe khelche
tader dike bhalo kore che dekhlam
oder shunyo chokhe aktai proshno
poriborton mane ki?


Peter jala shobar shera,attyosamman dwitiyo
bhadroloker upai nei tai korte baddho tarko
bhadro bhabe aaj bancha kothin
manusher mukhe tai aktai proshno
poriborton kobe hobe?



আজ বৃষ্টি এলো ,কিছু কথা হল 
অর বড্ড তাড়া ছিল ,বাড়ি ফিরে গ্যালো 
আমি আকাশের দিকে চে রইলাম 
একটা প্রশ্ন করলাম 
পরিবর্তন হবে তো?


Bridge এর তলায় ক্ষুদিত শিশু রা খালি গায় 
গরমের সাথে মিলেমিশে খেলছে 
তাদের দিকে ভালো করে চে দেখলাম 
ওদের শুন্য চোখে একটাই প্রশ্ন 
পরিবর্তন মানে কি?


পেটের জ্বালা সবার সেরা, আত্মসন্মান দ্বিতীয় 
ভদ্রলোকের উপায় নেই তাই করতে বাধ্য তর্ক
ভদ্র ভাবে আজ বাঁচা কঠিন 
মানুষের মুখে তাই একটাই প্রশ্ন
পরিবর্তন কবে হবে? 



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SHE KI CHAI AAJ BRISTI TE BHIJTE?

Sudoor akashe chhe achhe lalima
kyano theme gyalo subatash janina
amar shonkito mon abar asthir
aaj ke ashchhe ? bristi na jhor ?
aakulota bere gyalo, akta chena gandho pelam
ami anmona hoe galpo boi ta rekhe dilam
dekhi cigaretter dhoan ratrir hath dhore eshechhe
anahuto,mukhakriti biheen,tobe mukhe katha achhe
bristi nemechhe,tai abdaar jete hobe chhade
bolchhe adrishyo deoal ta aaj bideerno kore dite
deoal bhenge haath bariye dakte hobecigarette are shokha dujon kei ,akshathekintu oparer manush ta bhishon byasto jeshe ki chai aaj bristi te bhijte?

SAB YAHIN CHHOR JANA HAI / सब यहीं छोड़ जाना है

aksar aisa hota hai is rang badalti duniya mein
mahlon mein rahne waale dil ki basti ujaar dete hain
tijori bharte rahtein hain magar dil khali ho jata hai
amiri se ghar sajate hain aur dosti ka varjan karte hain
nasamajhi hai ye shayad, ya sachchai se darrte hain
jitna bhi sameta hai ant mein yahin to chhor jana hai

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अकसर ऐसा होता है इस रंग बदलती दुनिया में
महलों में रहने वाले दिल की बस्ती उजाड़ देते हैं
तिजोरी भरते रहतें हैं मगर दिल खाली हो जता है
अमीरी से घर सजाते हैं और दोस्ती का वर्जन करते हैं
नासमझी है ये शायद, या सच्चाई से डरते  हैं
जितना भी समेटा है अंत में यहीं तो छोड़ जाना है

CHITTHIYAAN TO THEEK THEEN,BAS KAGAZ PE PEELAPAN THA / चिट्ठियाँ तो ठीक थीं,बस कागज़ पे पीलापन था .... PEELAPAN THA

almari ki us taak pe,bahut dhool thi

wahan kuchh purani yadein jalon mein uljhi thi

benoor si shaam ki us maddham roshni mein

dhool hati,beeta hua pal tazaa hua zahan mein

jazbaton ne aise ghera jaise koi libaas ho

mano zindagi ke har silvat pe koi istri fer gaya ho

chitthiyaan to theek theen,bas kagaz pe peelapan tha

us kahani ke kitaab ke beech rakha phool thoda sookh gaya tha

shukra hai tab chitthiyaan theen varna kho jati yadein

e-mail aur mobile sandeshon ki bheed mein

aaj phir bemani si zindagi ko dikh gaya chhor

phir se kashti tairne lagi hai saahil ki ore

अलमारी की उस ताक पे,बहुत धूल थी

वहाँ कुछ पुरानी यादें जालों में उलझी थी

बेनूर सी शाम की उस मद्धम रोशनी में

धूल हटी,बीता हुआ पल ताज़ा हुआ ज़हन में

जज़्बातों ने ऐसे घेरा जैसे कोई लिबास हो

मानो ज़िंदगी के हर सिलवट पे कोई इस्त्री फेर गया हो

चिट्ठियाँ तो ठीक थीं,बस कागज़ पे पीलापन था

उस कहानी के किताब के बीच रखा फूल थोड़ा सूख गया था

शुक्र है तब चिट्ठियाँ थीं वरना खो जाती यादें

ई-मेल और मोबाइल संदेशों की भीड़ में

आज फिर बेमानी सी ज़िंदगी को दिख गया छोर

फिर से कश्ती तैरने लगी है साहिल की ओर

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WHAT IS SUCCESS?

It is very disappointing  to see a star like VIDYA BALAN succumbing to the coveted number game.Was it really necessary for her to do such an awful item number at this juncture of her career(mala zau de)? Her act and attire were not criticized much in 'The Dirty Picture' as the very concept of the movie had a particular era at its core.But this item number is simply indigestible.It is extremely unfair on her part to take her audience for granted.She is not an amateur,neither is she unintelligent then what could have been the driving force behind this abominably choreographed number? This proves even the most successful people are not immune to the number game.The definition of success is different for everyone , just like fingerprints! What I consider as an yardstick for success may well become the starting point for someone else's  ambitions.But what matters at the end of the day is that one should be happy.

I feel those in the entertainment business need to be more cautious because their activities leave a far reaching impression upon their admirers,specially the young minds,who are very easily lured towards their lifestyle and dressing sense. Which,later on becomes  very difficult to handle if the obsessed person belongs to the middle strata of the society,or probably I am wrong.The specialists are not at all painting a very happy picture as far as india's economy is concerned,but who is going to believe that! The crowd at the malls is definitely painting a different picture altogether.Consumerism is at its peak,and the middle class is not shying away from splurging either.

Quite possibly 'the disposable income' is not at all a botheration for the people in general and no one seems to bother about the method applied to achieve that goal.The means could be fair or unscrupulous ,original or copied,but what matters to most of the people is SUCCESS.Now this success is earned or stolen is hardly the point of consideration........but what about those who believe in the saying- 'hard work pays'!!!!

NADAAN DIL / नादान दिल .........

 दिल को क्या समझाएं, ये तो नादान है
 जिन्होंने दर्द दिया,वो तो समझदार थे
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हम तो बेफ़िक्री  में ज़िन्दगी जी रहे थे
मुहब्बत का अब्र न जाने कब भिगोंके चला गया
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कुछ लफ्ज़ ही तो थे,पत्थर  तो नहीं
पर दिल टूट गया, कैसे, मालूम नहीं
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जा रहे हो दूर मुड़कर ना देखना
अश्क दिख गए तो ,कहीं इश्क ना हो जाये
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 dil ko kya samjhayein,ye to nadaan hai
jinhone dard diya,wo to samajhdaar the
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hum to befikri mein zindagi jee rahe the
muhabbat ka abra na jane kab bhigonke chala gaya
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kuch lafz hi to the,patthar to nahin
par dil toot gaya ,kaise,maloom nahin
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ja rahe ho door,mudkar na dekhna

ashq dikh gaye to,kahin ishq na ho jaye
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FACEBOOK---THE GOOD,BAD AND UGLY

Came across this article in a newspaper recently(the telegraph dtd:21.05.12) which says facebook is hampering the social life of  people .It is actually converting the social creatures into' loners'.On the contrary, I think it is so engrossing that a person can utilize it as a platform to vent his/ her feelings and thoughts through his/ her creativity,whether it is writing,photography or posting some useful tips and links,making friends ,interacting with them.The most charming and interesting quality of  fb is the amount of  positivity it brings into our lives through endless encouraging comments.U can write whatever you want expecting minimal or no criticism at all.In a nutshell,a platform to showcase your talents.God has given us the power to communicate so why not utilize it!!

Those are the good points about fb but the other side of the coin is not that pretty though.Often people use this as a tool  to show off .Sometimes there is a huge gap between the real and virtual profile.Very often ,some married women  go on to the extent of flaunting their figure and dresses(wrong kinds) on fb to titillate  their male patrons.They actually enjoy these vulgar comments posted by their male friends forgetting the responsibilities they have towards their husbands and kids.They do not even mind sending kisses and hugs when it is probably their husbands who need them the most . same holds true for  the men who forget the caring wife who might be waiting for them in the dining room while they are busy flirting with their  girlfriends on fb. What is more appalling is the fact that most of these men are hypocrites.They would not allow their wives to wear a particular attire which they find quite attractive when their girlfriends don it.The so called vulgar dress would then become bold.Some of these men are orthodox to the extent that they do not even allow their wives to work lest they  should become too independent, but their fb profile tells a different tale altogether.. I am specifically discussing the married men and women here because the unmarried people are not always answerable to their partners and do have the liberty to terminate a relationship and start anew.

It is good to connect with celebrities as well..Some of them surprise us with their knowledge and  depth in  music,poetry,etc.still their are some who are eternally dissatisfied souls,who keep uploading their vulgar and grossly made up pictures to extract comments ,mostly vulgar and cheap from their fans.Female celebrities who have already stepped into their late thirties and are not 'in demand' know it pretty well that their shelf life is  reaching its expiry date rapidly and hence cannot do without such posts.

Facebook has now allowed teenagers as young as 13 yrs old to open accounts.now this is where the parents have to be very careful if they are allowing their kids on fb.Monitoring them on a regular basis is  a must.The first step would be to send them a friend request.
Facebook has helped me to come out from the self imposed loneliness.It is my 'stress buster' I would say.Everything in this world has had  plus points and minus points and facebook is no exception either.so hang on to fb.......

 

HAPLESS

A lonely lady in the street
quietly sitting in a corner
did I hear a whimper?

I see her from a distance
with little apprehension
her face bereft of any expression

Clothes so tattered, barely there
the baby she cradles is not crying
wonder if it’s alive or dying!

I go near with a gleam of hope
close to her bosom the baby she holds
spellbound spectator in me beholds

Is she crying or the tears have dried?
or a hapless beggar in bereavement!
am I the reason for her predicament?

Image courtesy- mother and baby by drawingandillusion.blogspot.com

EK ADBHUT KHAYAL / एक अदभुत ख़याल

garmiyon ki ik alsai si dopahari
achanak ek adbhut khayal aya
laga jaise main aladdin ban jaoon
aur uparwala bole , 'kya hukm hai mere aka?'
apni khwahishon ka chiraag ghiskar
jab chahe use bulaoon
wo bole kya hukm hai aur main maangti jaoon
bas yahin akar tham gaya mere khwahishon ka kafila
akhir maangne ki yahi fitrat hai badi jaan lewa
sapno ka kya hai khuli aakhon mein bhi sama jayen
aankhein to unka ghar hai,kabhi bhi aa jayein
darrte to hum hain unhe akaar dene se
isiliye to insaan hain,warna hum bhi bhagwaan hote........

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गर्मियों की इक अलसाई सी दोपहरी,
अचानक एक अदभुत ख़याल आया।
लगा जैसे मैं अलाद्दीन बन जाऊँ,
और ऊपरवाला बोले , "क्या हुक्म है मेरे आका?"
अपनी ख़्वाहिशों का चिराग घिसकर,
जब चाहे उसे बुलाऊँ,
वो बोले क्या हुक्म है, और मैं माँगती जाऊँ।
बस यहीं आकर थम गया मेरे ख़्वाहिशों का काफिला,
आखिर माँगने की यही फितरत है बड़ी जानलेवा।
सपनों का क्या है, खुली आँखों में भी समां जाएँ,
आँखें तो उनका घर है,कभी  भी आ जाएँ।
डरते तो हम हैं उनहें आकार देने से
इसीलिये तो इंसान हैं,वर्ना हम भी भगवान होते।

AB WAQT GUZARTA NAHIN / अब वक्त गुज़रता नहीं

pehle waqt kam padhta tha,ab waqt guzarta nahin
pehle ansoon koson door the,do hath zaroor the yahin
pehle zulf uljhe bhi to ,suljha deta tha koi
pehle nazrein betab rahti theen,ab to samne rehte hi nahin
gila karein bhi to kisse karein,ye to patthar hai insaan nahin
guldasta sajane baithe the,kante to chubhne the kayee

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पहले वक़्त कम पड़ता था,अब वक़्त गुज़रता नहीं
पहले आँसूं कोसों दूर थे,दो हाथ ज़रूर थे यहीं
पहले ज़ुल्फ उलझे भी  तो ,सुलझा देता था कोई
पहले नजरें बेताब रहतीं थीं,अब तो सामने रहते ही नहीं
गिला करें भी तो किससे करें,ये तो पत्थर है इंसान नहीं
गुल्दस्ता सजाने बैठे थे,काँटें तो चुभने थे कयी