Wednesday, August 21, 2013

SYMPHONY...









That path
paved with thorns
and velvety flora
led not to the oblivion
but to your heart


My heart
and my mind
their sameness
in rhythm and lyrics
created one symphony
core was you..






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  1. in rhythm and lyrics
    created one symphony
    core was you....very good underlying notion
    aamaar bloge ki hachchhe aapni to jaantei paarchhen naa. hayto aamaar blog falo karenni tai .aamaar duto blog aachhe .any way best of luck.
    latest post नेताजी फ़िक्र ना करो!
    latest post नेता उवाच !!!

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    1. thank you Dada.. ami apnar blog visit korechhi

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  2. Like this poem Symphony. Its small and appealing.

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  3. हिंदी ब्लॉगर्स चौपाल {चर्चामंच} के शुभारंभ पर आप को आमंत्रित किया जाता है। कृपया पधारें!!! आपके विचार मेरे लिए "अमोल" होंगें | आपके नकारत्मक व सकारत्मक विचारों का स्वागत किया जायेगा |

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    1. bohat bohat badhai Lalit ji. zaroor dekhoongi aapka blog. dhanyavad

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  4. I enjoy your work. You are very creative.

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    1. Thank you for the kind and encouraging words Chirasree.

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